2024 Fenland Poet Laureate Awards: Winners and shortlisted entries
Read all the winning and shortlisted entries from the 2024 Fenland Poet Laureate Awards
2024 Fenland Poet Laureate Award
- First place: The Un-Coupling, by Hannah Teadale
- Second place: transient, by Pen Avey
- Third place: A Fenland Ode, by Jonathan Moore
- Shortlisted: I Left You Once, by Catherine Blake
- Shortlisted: Moving to the Fens, by Judith King
- Shortlisted: The Legend of the Lost, by Laura Collins
- Shortlisted: A picture of Fenland, by Brenda Barber
- Shortlisted: Wisbech or Bust, by Tony Trayford
2024 Young Fenland Poet Laureate Award
- First place: Christmas Truce, by Lacey Vinn
- Second place: River's Rest, by Nathanael Wilson
- Third place: I the eel of Ely, by Lydia Shillings
- Shortlisted: Cricket, by Frederick Fox-Brown
- Shortlisted: Song of the Fens, by Adriana Mauremootoo
- Shortlisted: The Wetland Secrets, by Dadisai Honde
- Shortlisted: A Place Of Our Own, by Phoebe Trew
- Shortlisted: Fenland Flatlands, by Oscar Wierzba
- Shortlisted: The Wanderer, by Oliver Redding
The Un-Coupling, by Hannah Teasdale
(Inspired by my Winter sightings of the migrated swans to the fields in Fenland)
I cannot hear her through the interjection
of wild-life and traffic. I tread
on the damp-hope of finding less barren land
where in our hundreds we winter-gather
But even in this light-whisper of dark,
I cannot see. The moon - our gift
has turned its back on me. No sanctuary,
no space left in its wisp of crescent. I am blind
to life without her. It is I who should provide
but already I am nothing without her side of reason.
I miss her hiss of protection when others' young
come on weekends, stand too close
to the edge with offerings of stale bread, tantrums,
melting ice-creams and good intention
The air smells more of spoiled crops than open waters
Perhaps the icy fingers have lost her discretion -
the wind blows in the wrong direction. The cold
refuses not to rise. A hint of presence in the mirk
Spider-web traces are all I find. I wish
for once, to feel her sharp beak bite.
transient, by Penn Avey
My life begins on meadow, drained from salt bog long ago.
Clay laid first to hold me fast, then wooden joists
hoisted high by flat-capped men, encasing bones in Battenburg brick.
A smiling door, vermillion to match my step,
complementary bright brass fixings all topped off
with terracotta tiles and a chimney pot.
The first two come.
He works black Fenland earth through windswept days,
she turns a handle; runs up floral curtains.
I shut my glassy eyes a while to owl hoots and cat fights.
Her belly swells four times -
Three succumb to sickness, yet one remains.
The whirlwind boy climbs an apple tree Father planted out back.
Slips and lands in Mother's arms -
his laughter drifts through summer nights.
He ages well but marries not;
lives out his dotage in one stark room,
hunted by a tallow moon.
Iron railings flake with rust.
Floral curtains rag to dust.
Greasy soot belches from my oak-mantled hearth.
Above, a sweeps brush pushes up to sky -
darkened, ominous as
metal birds drone by.
A single lady, sharp, refined
adopts me. Spends her waking time
stripping walls and planting pansies.
I shine with pride when dawdling strangers
stop to admire my smart facade.
A blackbird sang the night she passed.
My newest family dwells snug within.
I love them much as they love me -
Affection edged in melancholy.
Knowing they'll move on, one way or another
and leave me bare. Pining for
a transient lover.
A Fenland Ode, by Jonathan Moore
I've lived in the Fens since I just don't know when
So my toes are all a bit webbed
My wellies have holes, our garden has moles
And our dog is only three legged
Our house has two beds for our seven large heads
So I share my small bed with my sisters
We all share our shoes and fight hard to choose
The pair that don't give us blisters
My Pa catches eels to provide for our meals
And now and again pays the rent
My Ma singles beet for gangmaster Pete
Who everyone knows is quite bent
Everyone pens that us folk from the Fens
Are interbred and doolally
But it's just not that fair cause our teeth all have hair
And my brother just married Aunt Sally.
I Left You Once, by Catherine Blake
I left you once.
I drove away full of hope and fear
I longed for new and didn't hear
You calling me back
Your Fenland Blow
Still howling, chilling my childish ear.
I stayed away.
I found an undulating landscape
Grey, stark and full of dreams
Of someone.
You didn't give up
I felt it on my back, your late summer sun.
Years pass quickly.
Friends fall like leaves
Shadows follow you and whisper
'Come home.
Before it's too late.
We forgive your misguided need to roam'.
You summoned me here.
Your tall sky, your fields and dykes.
Your sunsets, pure and deep.
You're in my blood
Which is why
I tried to stay away but found I never could.
Moving to the Fens, by Judith King
"The Fens!" they thundered,
(traffic roaring by, buses belching fumes into the roses
imprisoned in the public park)
"The Fens! Back of Beyond! - and flat!
And flat it was.
I rattled along empty switchback roads
spinning through endless acres of black earth,
a scattering of houses pitched at crazy angles,
sinking in the fen.
Roads banked up above the fields,
the menacing glint of water either side,
And signposts hung with mist,
pointing to unknown places sending shivers down the spine;-
Floods Ferry, Burnt House, Block Fen, Dykemoor.
"The Fens!" I thought.
"What have I done?"
But what I found was unexpected loveliness,
An arrow through the heart;
Mellow market towns,
Slow narrow-boats that nudge the mooring
where the Nene
shakes her pale mane of reeds
and peacock butterflies dance above the nettle beds;
willows that dabble delicate fingers where the moorhen bobs;
a blaze of flowers in Summer; Christmas lights
that make our tiny village
bright as a bauble in the windy night;
And friendship, as we cluster round the fire
in The Five Alls
while outside, in the gathering twilight of the past,
the rumbling waggons and the patient hooves still go, perhaps,
into the darkness of the fens.
I found vast skies and coral sunsets,
dawns of fire,
that free your soul and let your spirit soar.
The Fens!
Who'd ask for more?
The Legend of the Lost, by Laura Collins
Lost socks, missing parts,
Victims of circumstance, and lonely hearts.
Down by the river; dawn light streaming,
Torn apart, but ever still dreaming.
Hotel room art, a sky so black.
Traipsing through fields and over the tracks.
Destinationless, unattached, bound to sink,
Don't pretend to care, when that's what you think.
But what about...
Blossoming minds, resources spare,
People are people, life is unfair.
Reaching out, one arm to another,
Okay or not, Fenland sisters and brothers.
Pushed around; but be still now,
They might assume, but you ask us how.
"How can we help? What we do?"
Life is more and the key lies with you.
Lost socks, missing parts then,
A horizon so long; we're found again.
The wrong crowd, the misunderstood,
Now will be heard. For once and for good.
A picture of Fenland, by Brenda Barber
Criss crossed with green and brown rectangles,
Hedged by bushes and manmade willow fences
And sprinkled with poppies.
Footprints in the mud of animals and birds large and small and tiny.
Scudding clouds rushing overhead and also clear blue skies
And now and then, a striking rainbow.
Cottages dressed in thatch and held together with black wooden beams.
Stone built farms with cattle grazing and noisy fowl in clucking mode.
Rivers, streams and ponds aplenty,
Babbling brooks tinkling over stones and pebbles.
Country roads meandering between pretty villages and small towns.
Filled with maypole centred greens and country pubs with open doors.
Smiling landlords with open arms.
Children skipping hand in hand, their satchels filled with yoyos and conkers.
On their way to village schools with flower filled borders.
Country houses with close cropped lawns and fountains .
Rows of red brick houses.
Each garden with white sheets billowing on the washing line
And a snoozing dog in front of a wooden kennel.
OR
Choked A roads, exhaust fumes and pot holed roads.
High rise buildings taking over towns and cities.
With mirrored windows that you cannot see inside of.
Out of town malls with every kind of shop inside.
Massive car parks filled with every kind of motor vehicle
And all fined if they stay too long.
Concrete secondary schools with asphalt playgrounds where children push and fight.
School bags hiding knives and vapes or cigarettes.
Multi-purpose buildings where a man owns just one room in which he cooks, eats, sleeps and dies.
Canals awash with filth and rubbish, factories' output killing the fish.
Neighbours fences getting higher and higher and no one knows their next door's name.
Humungous sheds filled with thousands of featherless chickens.
Cows that never step on grass or get to feed their young.
Is this a dream or
Is this what we've become?
Wisbech or Bust, by Tony Trayford
I'm Dennis the Menace
** of the table tennis
First I'm up
** and then I'm down
I'm like the "Jack in the box"
** or an animated clown
I serve at the side
** or should I say wide?
Then I start with a spin
**and loop it back again
I'm all over the place
** I really must say
Sometimes I'm great
But, mostly, it's an "off day"
I block to the left
** and I chop to the right
Sometimes it seems that I'll
**be here all night?
A point is worth chasing
** with some regret?
Because I am still racing
* ** to put it into the net!
SOMETIMES, however
**and this I insist!
It all comes together
** in the form of a blitz!
** SOMETIMES, a ROUT!
** a "purple patch", I feel?
** It's beyond any doubt!
For all of their appeal??
SO: here it is:-
A player who's so erratic
** One time a loser
** and the next ecstatic!
I love this game
I truly confess!
I like to beat the others
** but, usually, it's a mess
Christmas Truce, by Lacey Vinn
A far away chant
A whisper of a song
A recognizable voice
A place where they belong
A sudden light appears
The carols start to get loud
But they continue with their song
So young yet so proud
Silence fell upon the night sky
No more missiles or gun
Now just birds tweeting
And a distant sound of fun
He risks it all in a few seconds
But two nations learn to trust
Commanders get angry
But soldiers state it's Christmas we must
The sun rose as the fun begun
Exchanging pictures and a story
Both countries would whisper
"I wish we both could have the glory"
As fast as you know it
Both countries play a game
Foosball slash football
As soldiers enjoy the fame
Hours go by
Laughing and talking
Every soldier rests their legs
As they've been doing so much walking
A far away thunder
Falls upon them all
They say goodbye and leave
An explosion "there goes the ball"
All the magic
Of Christmas past
Both country's soldiers
Praying it wasn't the last
But a secret exchange
A sausage for a treat
A heartwarming gift
Wishing the end was down the street
Proof no soldier wanted to be there
Wishing it was more than a Christmas Truce
They get forced to shoot again
Thinking hard to find an excuse
In the end the battle continues
The soldiers forced to put friends aside
Pow! Boom! Goes the guns
Both country's only fighting for pride
River's Rest, by Nathanael Wilson
Willow, consumed by blazing scarlet, as weaving
River runs its course. Through softly spoken, whisper
Thin ripples, glides swan, a silent listener.
Grouse clatters, thunder rumbles, as adder
Slinks and slithers. Sparse Fen, ice flecked
Peat, its voyage checked.
Day breaks, dew dances, as heron hunts
And damselfly darts. Above the pools, on fragile stems
They perch, living gems.
Night falls, owl calls, and still the willows
Standing tall. Amidst the reeds, of hissing sound.
Amidst the flotsam run aground.
Water soothes these moonlit banks, as nightjar cries
And lapwing stutters. Across the lake, on pondweed bed
A single moorhen rests its weary head.
I the eel of Ely, by Lydia Shillings
I the eel of Ely.
I slither and slide,
I ebb and glide.
Through the murky marsh of the fens.
I the eel of Ely.
I hunt the stickleback in my home,
But they're more compact since the farmers have sown.
Sown the crops on the fields they've drained.
I the eel of Ely.
I'm driven closer, closer than ever before,
To the muddy banks and the dry shore.
As more and more water is taken away.
I the eel of Ely.
I'm amongst the fishermen, all around,
My heart misses a beat as I'm scared by the sound.
The sound of the nets rising up from the bed.
I the eel of Ely.
Oh yes, I the eel of Ely, but,
I slither and slide,
I ebb and glide,
No more.
Cricket, by Frederick Fox-Brown
A tribute to Wisbech Town Cricket Club
COMING BACK TO THE NETS AT THE BEGINNING OF THE SEASON, SEEING ALL OF THE FAMILIAR FACES FILLING ME WITH JOY.
RUNNING IN TO BOWL LIKE A ROCKET IN THE FIRST GAME, HEARING MY FEET THUDDING ON THE CREASE AND MY HEART POUNDING IN MY CHEST.
IN TOTAL JOY AT THE SOUND OF THE METAL AND WOOD CRASHING TO THE GROUND, MY TEAM CELEBRATES THE WICKET OUR ADRENALIN RELEASING ALL AT ONCE.
CHEERING FROM THE SIDELINE, MOTIVATING MY TEAM TO WIN, FEELING NERVOUS AS THE OVERS SLOWLY CREEP BY.
KEEPING THE BALLS FROM THE BOUNDARY DIVING LEFT AND RIGHT, TURNING MY TROUSERS WHITE TO GREEN.
EVERY BALL I HIT, HEARING THE LOVELY SOUND OF THE LEATHER CRACKING ON THE WILLOW OF MY BAT.
TEAMS SHAKING HANDS AFTER THE MATCH, NO HARD FEELINGS FOR EACH OTHER IN OUR HAPPY PLACE.
Song of the Fens, by Adriana Mauremootoo
Mists dance on waters, mysterious and deep,
Where herons stand sentinel, their vigil to keep.
A ballet of reeds in the soft, silted bed,
Where dragonflies waltz, a delicate thread.
Beneath the vast sky, where the clouds gently roam,
The fens tell a story, a quiet, ancient tome.
Fields of fen cotton, where the wind gently sways,
And the sun's golden fingers, in the rushes it lays.
Reflecting the heavens, the still waters gleam,
A mirror of dreams, in the fenland's esteem.
Oh, the fens hold secrets, in the silt they confide,
As history whispers, in the ebb and the tide.
Beneath the vast skies, where the curlews cry,
And the willow's soft rustle tells tales of the sky.
A symphony of nature, in the fens it resounds,
Where the earth and the water, in harmony, bound.
So wander through fenlands, where the heart finds repose,
In the embrace of the marshes, where tranquillity grows.
For in the fens' story, there's a lesson to glean,
In the dance of the reeds, in the fen's quiet sheen.
The Wetland Secrets, by Dadisai Honde
I take a road trip to Wisbech, visiting my aunt.
It's a long drive from Cambridge...
And we were going to pass through The Fens.
I could be absorbed in the car seat out of languor.
What can entertain me?
I look outside, and I see a whole new country, fantasy, in the blink of an eye.
The flatness of the land
The reeds protruding out of the shallow, rippling water swaying.
It's like they are dancing to the silent song of the wind,
Slowly but they still manage to stay in time.
The river is so calm and tranquil,
Covered with little spots of algae and plants.
It stretched out for miles and miles though,
But suddenly, I spotted a flock of swans
Gliding across the soft wetlands.
Their porcelain coats of feathers made them look like floating clouds.
Clouds hovering over the wetlands,
But all of a sudden, our car hit a sharp turn, turning away from the alluring swans.
I was thwarted, but I saw two bunnies hopping on the verdant grass,
Their delicate feet soaking into the grass two at a time.
We took another turn into a neighbourhood, clearly signalling we were nearly at my aunt's house.
I was irked that my Fenland adventure was over,
But at least I will experience it again on the way back!
A Place Of Our Own, by Phoebe Trew
Endless fields beneath vast skies
Soil so rich and black it defies.
Twelve pylons counted on the horizon's line
Agriculture's rhythm, a story sublime.
Migrating swans and sugar-beet mounds
Tranquil marshes abound to be found.
Buildings once proud, strand with weathered grace.
Time has left its mark on each familiar face.
Faded murals on walls, telling of yesteryears,
Yet beneath the surface a resilient pride.
Less people, more quiet, a subtle home,
Beneath sea level, a place of our own.
Fenland Flatlands, by Oscar Wierzba
Over the flatlands,
Over the fields,
There lie rivers, dykes and much more,
Boring it may seem,
Whittlesey is a machine of beauty,
As the lock sleeps,
The Bower reaps havoc,
As the wind turbines turn,
The cars on the road swerve,
As you may have heard,
The roads turn,
There grows the fern,
In the forests of turn,
As the grass grows green,
The farmers are very keen.
The Wanderer, by Oliver Redding
Standing tall but feeling so small
The church, the post office, the village hall,
He wanders
He feels so lonely,
He longs,
For somewhere homely,
Somewhere he belongs
He wants to find someone who will care,
But he can't find anyone anywhere,
He wanders on and on,
Trying to find someone who's kindness hasn't gone,
He is sad and alone,
And can't find anyone who will welcome him into their home,
He wanders into the Fens and thank his lucky charms,
It was full of people who welcomed him with open arms.